5. I am most proud of my introductory paragraph, I think it is my strongest paragraph. I gave background to my topic and clearly stated my thesis. I also enjoyed writing this paragraph most, it flowed well and I think it turned out good.
6.For the paragraph that I am least proud of I chose my conclusive paragraph. It was hard for me to paraphrase and rephrase all of my points in that short of space. I feel that my conclusion is weak and that I could have written a more strong one. I have never been that great at conclusion paragraphs, but they are something that I am looking forward to progress on.
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